one more lash
targets the bleeding back
skin peels away
to reveal steel underneath
the fiery eyes
burn brighter –
burn with purpose
after each strike
meant to cripple and singe
stumbling through rubble
fighting with
broken teeth and infected nails
as long as feet may carry
as long as spirit prevails
to the end of corruption,
to the dawn
of mankind!
on!
On!
ON!
this one is about the Civil War in Syria – following dVerse‘s rebellious call…
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love the embedded message in this….intense and vivid verse…fighting with
broken teeth and infected nails
as long as feet may carry
as long as spirit prevails…love that part…this is like an anthem….really nice…
thank you very much
Clever really liking this take on rebellious
thank you… your “fault” really that i ran into this 🙂 had to give it a try, it was just too tempting
Yep That kind of how got into it to
I will never understand what is going on in the Middle East. Brother killing brother. Terrorist attacks on woman and children. The old countries need to stop and be logical. When madness and death is the will of the leadership. Maybe need better leaders.
i know… 😦
Really really good….just pure passion and courage in these words….I cannot begin to even remotely understand the plight of the syrian people, and what strength….this was a rallying call if ever there was one….love it
( i just found this in my spam folder for some reason – glad i checked before deleting :)) thank you. yes, we can only hope that it will be over soon… and in a good way.
Powerful write!
thank you 🙂
Loved reading your verse….the struggle is happening very close to me
ugh… all i can say is: stay safe!
i’ve talked to someone a while ago who’s living there and it’s so tough…could feel his pain while we talked…hopefully there will be peace for them soon
… nothing to add. thank you for this.