Walking in the Wild

paint the moments blue and green
and give it all a silver sheen ~

memories are solemn friends,
to those who think it never ends.

the faith of fallen’s sturdy mind
is (almost always) undefined ~

but leads to one more step ahead,
for those who walk, won’t be mislead.

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8 thoughts on “Walking in the Wild

  1. I kind of like it… but I don’t really think I understand the third stanza. This does not at all mean you need to explain it to me. I just know how hard it can be to get any feedback on a poem.

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