she isn’t sorry.
tap tap tap
she attacks the tabletop
relentlessly;
blue-painted missiles target
oiled hazelnut craftsmanship
in staccato rhythms.
she isn’t sorry.
she looks at me, a pink bubble
growing
between cherry lips ~
growing, Growing;
defiance in her stare,
challenge extended;
(GROWING)
tap tap tap
POP
the pink-smeared smile
doesn’t touch her
(tap tap tap)
eyes.
her tongue snakes out,
gathers
the sticky, playful rebellion.
teeth start chomping again.
she leans back with a huff,
old chair complaining
at the sudden movement.
she isn’t sorry.
tap tap tap
i wait.
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Brian Miller over at dVerse Poets Pub invites us to focus on the details today… an interesting challenge.
Come join us at the bar!
The comments helped understand your poem. I read it again and really enjoyed it. At first, I thought it was an angry craftsman working at a piece of furniture. I am so dull.
It was fun during the second read — thanx.
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thanks for the visit, Sabio 🙂
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I’m thinking it’s a rebellious teenager having a staredown with a parent. Loved the bubble gum blowing while the eyes stay fixed…no hint of a smile in them…no, she’s not sorry! Love it, Miriam!
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thank you! 🙂
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Oh dear tears before bedtime, one fears!
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uh oh…
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Ah a real stare down. Patience patience, the one who says anything looses. I can see the scene. A minor detail,caught my eye. The second isn’t seems to be a little wrong 🙂
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oooh, thank you! didn’t see that one – gonna get fixed now, that little bugger! 😀
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