dr(own) me
in a river of l(us)t;
f(u)sed and (me)rged,
s(in)king
tog(ether).
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dr(own) me
in a river of l(us)t;
f(u)sed and (me)rged,
s(in)king
tog(ether).
Another Wandering Soul 
like this very much. Two for the price of one– your depth is amazing
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awh, glad you like it 🙂
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Well I failed ha ha! I tried to write a comment in the style of your poem but failed… so I’ll just say… brilliant! and smile 🙂
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awh thank you! 😀
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Really love how the buried poem kind of restates the surface poem.
Very well done–
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thank you 🙂
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