Seeming (Real)|Three Layers

dr(own) me
in a river of l(us)t;
f(u)sed and (me)rged,
s(in)king
tog(ether).

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36 thoughts on “Seeming (Real)|Three Layers

  1. Holy cats. This is awesome! Not only your top level poem, but especially the embedded poem: “own us—you, me, in ether” … fantastic.

    • thank you very much! glad you enjoyed it…
      can be read three ways, actually… the third one is:
      ‘own me
      in a river of us
      u and me
      in
      ether.

      😉 it was a puzzle for sure lol

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