dr(own) me
in a river of l(us)t;
f(u)sed and (me)rged,
s(in)king
tog(ether).
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Seeming (Real)|Three Layers
08 Tuesday Jan 2013
Posted in Poetical?!
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many [hi]dden [me]anings [he]re
😉
i hope you are well… see you
i am, thank you… swamped with work, that’s all… hope you are well, too! 🙂
hopefully there’s enough delight in the “swamped” to make it worthwhile
yeah, it’s alright 🙂 plus, with every ‘swamped’ day, weekend moves closer!
strength to you Miriam and thank you for encouraging me with words that emanate from a beautiful soul… in spite of this swamping world. Be well!
you, too Vincenzo! Have a lovely week!
keep bouyant at all times my friend
🙂 only if you do…
It wouldn’t be fair. I’m still on vacation so there’s no merit… unless it’s in the swimming pool!
ooooh that sounds superb!!!
that is the joy of teaching… longer holidays!!!
haha sounds great – i hope you enjoy your time off in every aspect 🙂
many thank-yous Miriam. By the way I finally came up with a more poetic name for my blog after turning it over for so long. The new name will be “whirlwind rider” from now on or maybe all stuck together “whirlwindrider”
oh, that is just beautiful. it fits you and your poetry.
yes i’m writing a blog introduction now… so you’ll get a notice anytime these days. I felt that one hypervigilant temperment described me only in a clinical manner… like some psychological blog of sorts
yes, you are much more than that.
can’t wait to see 🙂
2:45am here now… i’m going back to bed. enjoy your day, nice talking again!
ah, yes… bed… nighty night dear Miriam.
night 🙂
🙂
Holy cats. This is awesome! Not only your top level poem, but especially the embedded poem: “own us—you, me, in ether” … fantastic.
thank you very much! glad you enjoyed it…
can be read three ways, actually… the third one is:
‘own me
in a river of us
u and me
in
ether.
😉 it was a puzzle for sure lol
Very impressive…all three ways! This must have taken you a while to compose…perfection.
thank you, Marx 🙂 yeah, it took me a bit…
Love the buried poem inside the poem. Beautiful.
Oddly enough, I have a draft from last night where I used ether–hahaha–something was in the air, or ether, last night.
hahaha i believe so 🙂
WOW I loved the way you did this Miri, very cleverly written 🙂 x
thank you very much! 🙂
like this very much. Two for the price of one– your depth is amazing
awh, glad you like it 🙂
Well I failed ha ha! I tried to write a comment in the style of your poem but failed… so I’ll just say… brilliant! and smile 🙂
awh thank you! 😀
Really love how the buried poem kind of restates the surface poem.
Very well done–
thank you 🙂