lead the way into the wild ~
etch flowing paths into my feeble heart;
teach me the chords to nature’s truthful sound;
to keep still, when silenced; bound to life.
untie my legs and draw me out to walk,
to find courage within, through gentlest touch.
miraculous; simple touch
revives parched dreams; finds stray hope, running wild.
rivulets of souls mingle as we walk,
to swell; with rawness, engulf weakened heart
and flood; waves’ tongues returning fragile life
to be cradled, gingerly; safe and sound
with these brittle bones, un-sound,
from solid stone to stone we hop; we touch
freedom’s sweetness, to coalesce with life.
find the fountain; youthful, deep pool of wild-
ness; cleanses, with ease, recovering heart
and mends weary bones, now destined to walk
nature’s call, perceived while walk-
ing; earth’s untamed presence, captured in sound ~
bittersweet song, unleashed to pierce the heart,
rises, in delicate tunes; tempting touch ~
the zenith; music, alive in veins, wild;
joyous ~ a glimpse at the meaning of life
strong, steady hand unfolds life;
now, at its fullest, and proudly i walk,
find serenity in this wayward wild.
whole now; the gift of my own voice, my sound
resonates, rewards me; i reach and touch
my soul; translucent, sister to my heart.
and through pulses of the heart,
the one, universal language of life,
we are united; led by spirit’s touch.
from valley deep to highest peak we walk,
among legends; set out, seeking the sound
the haunting rhythm, the call of the wild.
heart’s steady beat guides, wherever we walk;
through life, encouraged by ancestral sound;
by purposeful touch, reborn… in the Wild.
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… a Sestina (hard work, argh!), inspired by the Iron Poets and linked to dVerse Poets Pub for OpenLinkNight. Doors open at 3pm EST… bring a poem and join us at the bar!
Lovely tone and rhythm here, I especially like ‘with these brittle bones, un-sound,
from solid stone to stone we hop’
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thank you very much! 🙂
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…ah, i just like your envoy… it really sings for me… a kind of offering or a surrender to a call of being bolder and daring… i had once tried a Sestina before (in my old blog, now defunct) and never tried another again… i was actually introduced to the form via dVerse when Gay featured it in Forms For All…. i must admit a difficult one to execute but worth doing and much enjoyable to pen down…. great offering… smiles…
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awh, thank you very much for your wonderful comment!
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Wow Miriam, that is one amazing sestina of a poem… I especially like the verse about finding serenity in the wayward wild
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thank you very much, Vincenzo!
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So beautiful. Really love it from begining to end. Moving and inspiring
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thank you very much, happy you enjoyed!
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