rolling hills
of jade(d) green
sprawl
under the (dull-edged) sun
(weeping) willows
whisper
of (doomed) future days
and raise their voices
full of promise.
rolling hills
of jade(d) green
sprawl
under the (dull-edged) sun
(weeping) willows
whisper
of (doomed) future days
and raise their voices
full of promise.
Oh my goodness, what a wonderfully crafted piece of art! I see the present and the future so perfectly superimposed on each other. And you do it with a minimal amount of words. What a writer you are Miriam E.!
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wow! thank you so much!!
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I liked the sentiment here. Such swift & powerful little words… it’s often the green ones who have the final wisdom.
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thank you very much for the visit 🙂
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Nice bracket uses Miriam. 🙂
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hehe thanks 😉
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