for better or worse you sound
like glass, crunching
beneath the strained heels of Atlas.
I didn’t witness you wrap around yourself
in intricate layers,
but I can still see the faint ember glow
beneath the smoke-stained stories
you forged, unmistakably.
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Another Wandering Soul,
The imagery involving Atlas really is quite good. Bravo.
-Soul Walker
Thank you. Glad you like it… 🙂
Love the feeling of pressure, of depth and fire, hidden yet sensed.
good stuff, miri–
thank you – glad you enjoyed. it’s so good to see you! 🙂
Likewise, dear. My time has not been my own, but I’m getting it back. I hope to be around more.
Same for me. I write when I can… wish I had more time to…