Pity with a “P”

poor, poor person.
please, pour out your soul!
pores dripping
perfectly arranged words
pound out the predicament –
if you would only learn;
from your poorly shaped
personal pestering…

but you persist on
stacking pebbles,
why they keep
blocking your perspective.


7 thoughts on “Pity with a “P”

  1. This is awesome. Love the alliteration and the truth you speak to this topic in such a poetic way.

    “but you persist on
    stacking pebbles”

    What a futile endeavor and great imagery.


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